Hi, Here is your grade and specific revisions for the final. Remember that the final is graded on the changes that you make (especially according to these suggestions), so please check in with me if you have any doubts about the comments on the first page or in the margins.
Thanks for all the awesome work you’ve done so far!
Thesis 17/20 Organization 18 /20
You have made some fantastic progress with a good draft and an excellent basis for your final paper. You have brought together useful, challenging sources. Your writing is clear and well-structured and your examples are interesting. There are a few things you ...