The speech provided explains the personal life of the speaker. The introduction speech seeks to notify the listener on the personal and social life of the listener. The speaker may also find it necessary to provide their professional information. Generally, the objective to the listener is to identify the speaker from the personal information they provide about themselves. In addition, listener seeks to understand the speaker from a personal point of view from the information they provide. How well did the speaker satisfy the objective of the speech? The paper will analyze the speech from the four required parts; introduction, main points, conclusion and transition.
The introduction of the essay seeks to capture the attention of the listener. The speaker should state the purpose, intent and thesis of the speech. The development of the development of the thesis should be progressive from the first sentence. The thesis statement should be preceded by the speaker stating his name and the speaker then introduces the topic. The topic definition should be done without any bias. The general information about the problem should be stated. The speaker should then develop a problem statement or statement of the content they want to address. The thesis statement is then developed. In this particular speech, the speaker does not provide a solid introduction to their intent in the speech. The introduction is minimal and the listener is not provided with enough information on what the speaker intends to speak about. However, the speaker self-introduction was great. As required they directly stated their name and place of residence. This developed the ability to understand the speaker by the listener. In the speech the introduction would be elongated to include the reason of the presentation and the specific objective of both the speaker and the speech.
In a speaking presentation, the main points should be clearly stated and evidenced through a series of argument. In this type of speech, the listener will seek to understand the different component of the personal life of the speaker. The speaker on the other hand should strive to state specific talking points about their life. The main points should also be provided as required by the general objective of the speech. Additionally, the speaker should ensure that the do not provide wide arguments that may develop alternative points of view. The points should be specific and explained briefly and accurately. In this speech, the presentation of the main points is exceptional. The speaker briefly introduces a point and they briefly provide an analysis of the point. The listener is able to clearly understand the information provided. For instance, the speaker states that they like spending significant quantity of time but they are unable since they have to balance between work and school. The point and analysis is direct and accurate. As required the presentation of the main points constitute the largest part of the speech. Additionally, the speaker’s presentation the objective of the speech fulfilled. From the information, the listener is able to develop a perspective on the personal life of the speaker.
The conclusion of the speech should be a summary of the main points presented in the speech. The speaker should provide a general view on what the audience requires to understand. In this case, the speaker may find a word or statement that accurately describes their persona life and character traits. The statement should be able to provide to listener and accurate perspective of the life of the speaker. In addition, the part should include the restatement of the thesis provided in the introduction. In this speech, the conclusion is presentation is minimal. The speaker provided a good conclusion but limits the information provided. It does not include analysis of the main points presented. In addition, the conclusion misses the restatement of the thesis statement provided in the introduction. However, the speaker is able to notify the listener on the end of the speech. This is required as the listener should be directly notified when the speech is about to end.
The general organization of the speech was exceptional. The speaker recognizes the need to have the three component of speech. The speech comprises of a brief introduction, the body and a conclusion. In addition, the listener is able to clearly understand the progression from one part to another. The speech delivery was also great. The speaker provides direct eye contact with the audience. This allows for increased concentration from the listener. Until the end of the speech, the speaker maintains a steady eye contact. The language used is also clear. The verbal articulation and choice of words are exceptionally done. The listener clearly understands the words spoken and articulated by the speaker. Additionally, the speaker’s voice is loud enough to the listener. However, the body language of the speaker remains steady across the speech. The speaker should be able to use different sign languages to ensure better understanding by the listener. The speech also misses non-verbal cues.