Commerce Personal Statements Samples For Students

Being a committed and gifted international student, I am applying to the USC Marshall School of Business. My devotion to exact sciences, such as math and physics, including but not limited to other fields, are of my genuine interest. I am the progeny of an entrepreneurial family, with well-developed family business roots in my country of origin. This family business forms a precious legacy, which my founding great grandfather envisaged to continue for the next generations. Started as a merchant firm, it expanded into a mid-sized company with its subsidiaries abroad. As a young boy, I observed the peculiarities of conducting a ...

Admission Statement

There is a saying that consumers are becoming wiser in choosing their consumptions. I feel that this statement is a challenge for people who are behind advertising. Due to the increasing innovation and demands in the market, advertiser are constantly expected to come up with novel ways to broadcast their messages to the consumer group in a more effective and efficient manner. Advertising is fast-paced and intellectually challenging. And with that in mind, I wish to continue my studies related to the profession in order for me to better my expertise.
I am currently completing my bachelor’s degree in Michigan ...

Becoming a businesswoman has always been my dream. My interest in trade first developed during the secondary school, when I would get student stationeries from a bulk-buying store for the cheap price and sell them to my fellows, receiving my money back with some extra profit. I was quite successful and decided to span my consumers. It soon escalated from my school friends being my only customers to their parents purchasing from me as well. Eventually, I started looking for other opportunities to earn profit, and thus began to sell home-made chocolate. I received plenty of orders, especially on Valentine’s Day. ...

There has been ongoing debate regarding the effect of the globalization on the growth and development of the overall world. There are different views regarding the impact of the globalization; according to one school of thought globalization is beneficial for the overall economic development, whereas according to some people globalization results in negatively influencing the overall world. However, the best and most realistic stance in this regard is the middle position regarding the effect of globalization.
Globalization has changed the world in many ways; the environment of all the countries in the world has got the impact of ...

Personal statement.

The foundation for my zeal to study in business related courses grew up after my graduation from Bodwell High School in December 2011. This was after learning that entrepreneurship and innovation are the key elements in driving an economy and building ones future (Wolf 2009, pp.34). I learnt that business is the core foundation of growth and that the government is in the forefront in pushing for studying business. The course has a ready market in terms of employment and sole proprietorship.
For four years, since grade 10, I have been studying in Canada. My stay in Canada has ...

The pursuit of justice, particularly in relation to Intellectual Property Law, made me choose to apply for the law program after school. I was determined this was going to be my area of specialisation. I am particularly interested in copyright and patents, as studying Intellectual Property Law during my Bachelors degree in Russia made me appreciate the issues surrounding copyright and the need for copyright and made me want to study how copyright can be protected. I have research experience in this area, as the theme of my Diploma was about ways to protect authors’ rights, and my final ...

I have had a challenging and exciting start to my career, which I believe would set the foundation upon which I will establish a successful career in business, during the coming years. My crowning corporate experience stems from my stint, at the Al Otheim Markets. This is a Riyadh based wholesale and retail outlet, which was established in 1956 as a family business that has since become a listed company, with annual revenues reaching upwards of $910.74 million. The company has ventured extensively in whole and consumer markets, with the establishment of multiple ultra-modern stores across the country and the region. The company does ...

Curiositea Gift Company, the project that I developed together with other four girls, had the mission to sell affordable handmade vintage teacups filled with tea scented candles, shower gel or bath bombs, separately or as a gift. For this aim, we targeted as the end use women aged 30-50, with refined tests for home accessories and an interest in relaxation, harmony and aesthetics. The direct buyers, however, are much more varied, ranging from students to adults who desire to purchase gifts for their friends, mothers, and acquaintances. The main marketing strategy consisted in a combination of strong social media ...

Graduate education in business is applicable in many fields and enlightens the mind to the development of various enterprises in industry, commerce, and government. My academic and professional experiences have prepared me to pursue my MBA by teaching me the values of patience, dedication, and persistence. As an undergraduate student at Boise State University I was exposed to diverse and extensive coursework, particularly excelling in management courses. Throughout my time as a student I was constantly employed in several capacities that honed skills I was developing at university through interactions with peers and professors. Prior to my studies in the ...

When President Obama claimed that the U.S. could “out-compete” any country around the globe, he also emphasized that Americans needed to up the ante in terms of innovation . America has always been viewed as land of opportunities, a place where dreams could be turned into realities. This view was held not only by U.S. citizens, but also by the vast body of immigrants who resided in the nation as well as millions of people around the world who hoped to one day make the American Dream their own.
America was also the land of innovation and invention. Generation after ...

Program Director

Statement of Purpose
In the highly competitive and complex world that we strive to conquer daily, we sometimes forget that our most common struggle is being human. We focus on creating a selfhood based on a limiting personal or professional recognition when our common denominator is defining our humanity. I realize that my journey in defining self has been one of shaping my inner being struggling against a strong, external influencer. Recently, I reached a pivotal turning point in my life by redirecting my objectives from the standard and trusted environmental science direction chosen by my traditional Indian family. ...

Personal Statement

Degree Objective: Master of Arts Leadership and Administration
I am an international student studying a Masters of Arts degree at Valparaiso University, Indiana. Prior to my post- graduate study, I completed a Bachelor of Arts degree in Communication. Part of my undergraduate degree included a Fine Arts minor, in which I obtained a 3.7 GPA.
My earliest college studies began at Hang Zhou Normal University (China) in music education prior to transferring to the United States to study. These early studies earned me a scholarship to both Valparaiso University and Hang Zhou Normal University.
I have always been involved ...

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Personal Statement
As a consistently passionate learner, I have good academic standing. I completed my basic education at York Early College Academy, which an affiliated school of CUNY York College, and then obtained my undergraduate degree at CUNY York College. At age 17, I took high school classes along with college classes and then graduated with advanced regents’ diploma along with more than 50 college credits. At age 19, I obtained my bachelor’s degree and gave my former schools recognition, which was published in the news media. At hindsight, I am a highly motivated person who has eagerness ...

My passion for Computing and exploring latest applications has always motivated me to pursue it as a profession. I have successfully completed a technical course in Information and Technology from the University Of Missouri in 2010. My professional work experience as an Associate Engineer and Computer Operator has further strengthened my aim of becoming a proactive Software Professional. To enhance my knowledge I would like to pursue a course in Web Design and Development from The University of Denver. The prestigious institution offers one of the most experienced faculties, a world-class academic infrastructure and the latest international curriculum. The course will help me to ...

For a brave traveler through the desert, the ultimate goal is to arrive at his destination safely and in one piece. He has to endure the scorching sun that dehydrates him through and through with limited supply of food and water that can only sustain him for a certain period of time. He has to grapple with the extreme temperatures, both hot and cold, through the day and night respectively having to dress lightly during the day and then dressing warmly during the night to fight the cold. Desert animals like scorpions and snakes pose an imminent danger upon an encounter ...

If people look at my educational background and compare it to the program I am currently applying for, they have the tendency to look at my paper twice and wonder whether I am applying for the right program. You see, I have an undergraduate degree, a double major to be exact, in Chemistry and Chemical Engineering. To make things even odd, I even pursued graduate studies for Chemistry. I was a promising young chemist who was fortunate to have published two researcher papers because of this I received a number of Ph.D offers. It was as if my future was laid down ...

The business person who is both socially astute and civilly responsible is the one that will go the farthest. I firmly believe this, and take it to heart in my interaction with both the world of academia and the world outside the university system. I come to that system intending to pursue a major in business. I believe that by doing so I will be able to give back to my community, and the world at large, through pursuing business prospects that are good for both me, and society as a whole. This outlook enables me to move forward as part ...

I was born in a small city of CITY which is located in a province of PROVINCE in China. I spent my childhood there being a happy and careless child until the age of 9. Around this time, the factory my father was working at was closed and all the agreements with employees were terminated. With each day it became harder for my dad to feed our family of NUMBER people. We were forced to move all over the region due to my dad’s work. I could not stand looking how my parents were working 60 hours per week in order ...

“Follow your passion, and success will follow you.”Terri Guillemets

Even though I have spent the past ten years as a Surgical Technologist and Surgical Assistant and work part-time at Dragula Cycle, my career interest has changed from the operating room to the manager’s office.
My interest in obtaining an MBA and advancing into management started after discovering there’s a need in the field of healthcare; and realizing that I can contribute and gain more personal career satisfaction being able to impact the lives of patients outside of the operating room.
Texas A&M Commerce ranked 5th in US News and World Report, as well as “Tier 2” ...

Business

Human Resources; Corporate Offices: Burger King Worldwide5505 Blue Lagoon DriveMiami, FL
Re. Admission to Leadership Development Program
The Admission Department
It would be a privilege if my application to join your prestigious program in Leadership Development is accepted. Your program will not only give me the required exposure to quality international learning, but will also help me interact and learn from others who opt for this program. I am confident that by choosing to be a part of the program run by the Burger King Corporation, I will be able to acquire the desired knowledge and exposure necessary ...

Personal Statement

I would like to study for the part-time Master’s degree in International Relations to gain a general perspective and understanding of how current and future world affairs are likely to impact my business investments and operations. As the world becomes more globalized, events in one region affect business and relations in another. This interconnectedness and proximity requires the acquisition of a broad understanding of world affairs, as changes in one region may provide opportunities or create threats in another. By completing a masters in International Relations, I hope to acquire the skills and knowledge to judge and interpret world events more ...

My passion for medicine was developed through the hope of a young girl. “Put on the scrubs,” the Psychiatrist told me as we entered the sterile hospital room of a sixteen-year old girl. I stood next to the doctor as she talked to the girl, a girl whose face and body were so completely wrapped in gauze it would have been difficult for her to cry. “Will my skin go back to normal?” she asked. The physician answered honestly, “I do not know for sure, even though the flesh-eating bacteria that deprived you of your skin is gone, it could leave scarring--but ...

I believe medical school will give me the well-rounded education to fulfill my dream to become a Psychiatrist or Gynecologist. With the variety of programs, flexible schedules and affordable payments I will be able to pursue many options, but medical school is my dream and I believe medical school can make that dream a reality. To start experiencing the fun, yet academic, college experience, gaining knowledge and skills, and enhancing my career and professional life overall would mean the world to me. There are several things that shaped my decision to pursue my life long goal of practicing medicine; situations that ...

1. Please explain your interest in sending your son/daughter to Greenhill School.
Generally, Joyce is doing very well in the current school. However, I feel the overall environment in public school does not motivate kids to compete. I think we need to prepare kids to be more competitive in this global economy. I think a prestige school like Greenhill School can provide more challenges to her academically. I feel that Greenhill will give my daughter opportunities that would not have been available of receiving if he had attended a public school. Because I understand that private schools like Greenhill School ...

Personal Statement

Degree objective: [Insert the Degree Course you are applying for]
Currently, the global economy is at infantile fixation, characterized by high rates of taxation, deterioration of price values of commodities, and immense low levels of demand market. Similarly, a clear scrutiny of any essential attribute of any newspaper will credibly demonstrate that recent headlines address more emerging economic problems than any other topic. In light with this, the grandness and relevancy of any economic issues or disciplines to the modern and sophisticated world have propelled me to gain a valuable interest to study economic at high levels, most preferably masters ...